Nice
I have to give you a 10 automatically based souly on the fact that where able to do an entire animation drawn in another persons style. You pulled it off perfectly, almost as if Jeff himself had drawn this. From an artistic point of view, that's well worth a high score.
The humor was a little bland, especially considering that most of your jokes where rip offs from a widly popular movie that's easily over 10 years old. However, it was a valent effort and even though those lines are over played, they still spark a few smiles so I'll give you a 5 for trying. After all, humor isn't really the point behind this flash.
I notice a KKK member in the group of kids that beat Jeff's ass. Is this to show that even Klan's members are better human beings then one such as Jeff? Well, that's how I saw it anyway. You have to be a pretty sorry excuse for a human being when you have a klan member saying "you've done wrong".
Overall, you get a 10. Great art, nice sound, ok humor but you got your point of the movie across well. Regardless of personal feelings or politics, it is a very good flash film.
On a personal note, I would like to add one thing: It's nice to see people that haven't fallen in the PC world of "everybody has feelings" bullshit that you see so much of today. People saying shit like "How dare you attack a dead man..." makes me wish the human race would be banished from existance in order to cure the universe of it's terrible disease known as human stupidity. The kid shot up a school... how can anyone have any respect left for him?
As far as blameing society, well fuck that. I got picked on too, but I never killed anybody. And I listen to heavy metal and play violent video games every night. According to the press or PC Pussies, I should have shot up 3 schools by now. People should stop looking for excuses and place the blame where it belongs, on the person commeting the crime. But I digress...
Good flash.